Above is an emaze PowerPoint of the teacher and peer feedback which we received from pitching our film idea and it shows how we improved to make our film opening as good as possible.
And then after our first draft of Connect 4 was finished and we showed to our teachers we received this feedback:
Things we did well:
- Very clever titles
- Music is good
- Mise en scene is great
- Nice shots (love the titles)
Things we need to improve on:
- Voice over needs to be re shot, because is not strong enough.
- Need to signify how the kids and older kids are young and old versions of each other.
- Music volume feels off
- Cut to "I'll follow you"
- Fix Colour in grown ups playing in cabin
- More time needed on the "Tilly Hawkins" title
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